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December 14, 2011
By rainbowsnowleopard GOLD, Boise, Idaho
rainbowsnowleopard GOLD, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
one teenager sent a message to a newspaper saying: two homosexuals moved across the street. she wondered what she could do to improve the quality of the neiborhood.

the response: well, you could move

That’s what they are
The whisperers
The bulliers
The antagonizers
The snikerers
The stareres
They are grey
Because secretly
There jealous
Of our color
The rainbow that shrouds our
Blue green violet
Streak our silhouette
In a chorus of cascading hues
So yes, their:
Because they just
Can’t be truthful
Because they just
Can’t be themselves
Because they…

Aren’t colorful

The author's comments:
really lame tital i know

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on Sep. 5 2012 at 6:59 pm GOLD, Potomac, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you."
— A.A. Milne (Winnie-the-Pooh)
"writing is a struggle against silence" carlos fuentos
You miss 100% of the shots you don't take."

This is really good! Just a couple suggestions/comments :P 
1- put "souls" in the line above it, I think it might flow a tiny bit better 2- in the last couple of lines, maybe you could just write "because they just/ cant be truthful/and/cant be themselves"