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January 19, 2012
By EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
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Message body And through the mist I finally saw a faint light.
I saw the sparkle of her eyes in the distance.
Her smile gleaming like stars, As her hair flew like the wind.
It was a dark week.
So much despair
But the light shined.
It dried my tears.
For the pain was no longer.
The light grew stronger.
And closer I went.
It was the light I that pulled me in
Attraction as powerful as a magnet.
I was pulled.
I touched it.
Touching the sun
Touching her flesh.
I sweat
forgetting the feel
I was scared
I was afraid to lose my star again
For she always vanishes
Like all comets do
Why must she disappear
Answers as clear
as words in the sand
They slip away once you find the words
None can describe
I can not pronounce how I feel
The language of love
I use to be fluent in
Did I need an accent?
The tongue
oo well
the feel
When I'm with you
Like I belong
A song
With lyrics
With birds
I'm at home
Closer to the answer to the question
But unknown
I'm with you
Why do you love me
I deserve more pain
I'm just saying You deserve better
Best I ever had
Thank you
For everything
Being there
Being mine
I'm ready for you
Come home
I miss you
I need you
Be mine
Are mine
She's mine
Your gone
Tears like papers
Cut like scissors
Feeling of missing
Everything I had
I sigh
Hope 2 see you soon
I love you

The author's comments:
Might not understand near the end, i named a couple Drake songs , but i think you'll enjoy it regardless, if you spotted that you might respect the poem more

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on Feb. 4 2012 at 8:16 am
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

It is kind of like mine!!! (: love it!5/5

on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:17 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

I love this one it so amazing so full of emotion!!