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i mean every word

January 27, 2012
By TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
26 articles 28 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon because even if you miss you'll still end up among the star's

Love me love me
Hold me tight
when we were over you know i cried

I thought i was ready
I was wrong
Wanted my life
To be love song

I didnt want to leave
It was really hard
It was a long desion
I didnt draw a card

It wasn't you
It was me
I was totally wrong
I was no cup of tea

I want you back
But cant find the words
Without you my life is dispare
Without you I'm nothing but a nerd

When i said "i love you"
Every word still holds true
I need you in my life
Without you I'm just blue

I love you more
than you will ever know
Now i feel like im a fire
And your a light snow

But still I can not stop myself
From what i feel inside
I need you like a heartbeat
Your always on my mind

You'll never know how much I feel
Or how i long for us
I was need to wait for high school
I dont want to but i must

I pray you will still be there for me
I hope time will fly fast
And i hope love will come with it
And that the love will last

I hope you will wont be mad at me
For not telling you before
I just didnt have the courage
I wish i had much more

Please take me back
I hope we can move on
Maybe we can walk out of the
A 1000 times more strong

The author's comments:
this story is to J.T. if only you would read this you would understand it all

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This article has 2 comments.

on Jun. 24 2012 at 11:40 pm
AyeshaLiveLaughLove BRONZE, Overland Park, Kansas
4 articles 1 photo 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today."
-James Dean

Oh my god I loved it! It's so touching, I feel as if this was made for me. Wonderful piece of work!(:

Lovejuice GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2012 at 10:23 pm
Lovejuice GOLD,
19 articles 0 photos 55 comments
I alternated between loving the poem, and getting confused by it. It looks like you were trying to go for a rhyming scheme, but you didn't hold true to it all the way through the story, or you had some errors in it. If you clean up some of the grammatical mistakes and the capitalization errors, then I think you'll have a nice poem here.