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Shining Star

May 14, 2012
By kspoetry5518 SILVER, Castro Valley, California
kspoetry5518 SILVER, Castro Valley, California
6 articles 3 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Unity is needed; individuality is valued.

The hand I long to hold
To see how our fingers will mold

Across the room you are
As beautiful as a shining star

I make mental notes in my head
About your hair, your clothes, and everything you have said

The space between us seems so far
I long to be anywhere you are

Every time I see you my heart will flutter
My unsaid words to you I utter

As I stare at you I wonder and dream
Thinking we would make the ultimate team

But for now just the boy across the room you are
Not yet are you my shining star

The author's comments:
I hope a lot of you can relate to this. It was inspired by this guy I like. I actually thought of the first line while looking at his hands. I hope maybe someday he will know this was for him.

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Ink93 SILVER said...
on May. 25 2012 at 11:25 am
Ink93 SILVER, Waco, Texas
8 articles 5 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Treat other as you would want them to treat you bacause what goes around comes around

The picture relates to the peice i really love it because i can relate to this peice keep up the great work and you will truely be successful :)