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when she turned to I

June 6, 2012
By Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

when SHE was
SHE was afraid of everything
SHE found it hard to get over things
SHE couldn't trust
SHE never believed in HERSELF

now SHE IS
SHE ISN'T afraid as much
SHE still can't get over things
But least SHE learned to trust more or less
SHE believes in HERSELF more then ever

Let me tell you a secret she
is I and I is she

We have learned from our past
and will get better in the future.

The author's comments:
I realized one day that I was afraid of every little thing when I was little. and I didn't wont to be that anymore. as i get older I realized that some fear is good. I also realized that I need to trust people no mater how much the hurt me.

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This article has 3 comments.

DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 10:10 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Kiry.. 4 words your a awesome poet! I really can relate to this honestly cause I use to be scared of stuff. I like how you did a before and after type of feel. Suggestion: why did you capitalize certain words. Just wondering

justme242 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2012 at 5:59 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

yeah it is simple but really good and i can relate

on Jul. 20 2012 at 12:59 pm
MadisonGrace SILVER, Nowhere, Oregon
7 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything is okay in the end,
if its not okay it's not the end."
"Be who you are and say how you feel because if someone matters they dont mind and if someone minds they dont matter"
"If God brings you to it he will bring you through it!"

I like this it is really simple and amazing! keep writing!