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Hidden or being seen.

June 6, 2012
By Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

I try to hide,
but they always seem to find me.

They are really good at seeing though me costumes.

They never give me away,
thank goodness for that.

When I hide, they know why
and let me hide.

Its good I can hide,
cause i would rather be hidden then be seen.

People who are always seen,
always can be destroyed by nothing.

People who are hidden don't need the things that people who are seen need.

So let me hide
and I will let you be seen

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This article has 6 comments.

on Aug. 2 2012 at 9:52 pm
uniqueman34 BRONZE, Hillsboro, New Hampshire
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
your waiting for a train, a train that will take you far away, you hope you know where this train will take you but you dont know for sure. but it doesn't matter. how does it not matter where this train will take you? because we will be together

i love this!!!!!! i hope that you can be seen and still enjoy it rather being hidden all the time. but i do understnad that it is good to hide at times.

DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 10:14 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Kiry....... I like this poem. I like the message. But it got me thinking. Everybody likes to hide instead of branch out. Mhm....anyhow great job Suggestion: minor spelling errors. Your a beast at poetry keep it up!!!!!!

on Jul. 27 2012 at 4:35 pm
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

i really like this one , this is how i am a lot if the time too i could never put it to words though :)

on Jul. 23 2012 at 5:04 pm
@nime.@ngel BRONZE, Chicopee, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 34 comments
i really like this one!  i understand  really the message that ur saying i give it a 10 of 10  d\(^_^)/b!

spudbud GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2012 at 10:10 am
spudbud GOLD, Newton, Kansas
19 articles 4 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Where is the wise man? Where is the scholar? Have they not been made such a fool in their squalor?

For they desired a sign and sought for the wise

When the precursor of life was right in front of their eyes" - Wolves at the Gate

Very nice poem, and it made me think, which I love. There are a few spelling and grammer errors, but aside from that it's great!

on Jun. 15 2012 at 11:00 pm
2014Nation GOLD, Alma, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never in the world does hatred cease by hatred; hatred ceases by love. - Buddha

I really like this! .(: