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things in my life

June 4, 2012
By MyFinalDestiny GOLD, Central City, Pennsylvania
MyFinalDestiny GOLD, Central City, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stay golden" the outsiders

vanilla skys
to black covered flies
to deep rich lies
and light blue eyes
too heavy keyes
big fat bumble bees
late due fees
and deep blue seas
to the sun shine
speeding ticket fines
a long marching lineand a god written sign

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on Sep. 26 2012 at 8:15 am
lovingangel94 BRONZE, Shreveport, Louisiana
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the road we all must take if we are to find true happiness." (My mom)

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this poem is amazing

on Jun. 13 2012 at 1:09 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

for this poem you have to re read it to understand what is being said.

It captivates the reader wanting to know what the author is trying to say or why did the author write this.

I love the poem AND the picture


on Jun. 12 2012 at 1:09 pm
Creativity_1995_William GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
12 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why do stuff today that can be put off 'til tomorrow? ~Squidward Tentacles~

It was well written. I loved it. :)

monky99 said...
on Jun. 11 2012 at 6:35 pm
monky99, Concord, Massachusetts
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
swiggity swalt pass me the salt

I really like it, it was slightly confusing, but once you re-read it it makes more sense, i like the meaning behind it, good use of symbolism :)

on Jun. 11 2012 at 11:15 am
Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
13 articles 3 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Question Yourself. If someone tells you to change, stay exactly who you are. No one should ever try to change you.

I GET IT! XD at first i was cunfused but now i get it.... I think its really nicely wriitten.... KEEP IT UP!