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I fell for you.

July 25, 2012
By Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

I fall in love so fast.
Never knowing if it will last.

Please don't hurt me.
I'm down on the ground can't you see.

I took a chance and fell for you.

My heart is made of glass.
They never seem to last.

I gave you my heart.
Please don't tear it apart.

Now please don't make me wish it I didn't.

The author's comments:
I would like to dedicate this to every one who ever fell in love and didn't want to get hurt and to everyone who helped me write this poem.

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This article has 5 comments.

on Dec. 26 2012 at 5:34 pm
eliana_anastasia11 SILVER, Naperville, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don’t shine so others can see you. Shine so that, through you, others can see Him."

Really good! Loved the rhyming! 

DanielM SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 9:57 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Kiry..... Two words. Great Job. I really like this poem awesome job!!!! I really like the line on how my heart is like glass. Great use of imagery. Suggestion: Use more imagery

on Aug. 1 2012 at 1:35 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

I really like this and picture fits nicely with it, but I wish there was something more at the end. But good job! Keep writting!

justme242 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2012 at 12:10 pm
justme242 GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
help will be given to those who ask for it.

lovethe rhyming


on Aug. 1 2012 at 11:55 am
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

i thinks its cul how y say that ur heart is made of glass.. that is an awesome metaphor... luved it