Surviver | Teen Ink


September 30, 2012
By Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

I am ignored, I am in the depths of her shadow. Everyone compares me to her. I am the ending, I preach words and I take them to the heart, and I hear everyone as someone. I love you to the death, and I believed you loved me too. When you walk away from me, my heart shatters into 12 pieces and love poured into everyone's cup. With no person to mend my heart and replace at least one cup so I can restore it to love myself and more to come. I was gone, and you left me, but now I'm free and I rise, because I have the will to survive.

The author's comments:
Everyone asked me in my 8th grade why was I not like a girl in my class room. Even my boyfriend told me if we were to break up he would go with her.

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on Mar. 21 2013 at 7:59 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

I'm full of Awe.  This poem is short and sweet, you've said enough to the point where the words speak for themsevles. 

Blaque SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 3:31 am
Blaque SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments
TThank you sooo much guys

on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:43 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

You really tapped into my sole. XD

on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:27 am
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Wow... thats deep. Great job.

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Oct. 19 2012 at 11:27 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

I love it!