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My First Love

October 3, 2012
By SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
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There is something about you
That just seems too good to be true.
I knew from the first day I met you,
That I would surely want you.
I remember when we first met in the month of July.
With that sweet, yet flirty look in your eyes,
I hoped to have you as mine.
I remember when you asked me out on a date.
I would count down the days since I could not wait.
There, we had our first kiss.
It was too hard for me to resist.
As months passed by,
We did not say our goodbyes.
What we had must have grown stronger,
And I wanted this to last longer.
I remember the day we both decided it was time.
I just wanted you to be mine.
It felt like it was just yesterday
when I expressed my love for you that day.
I still have not forgotten about you.
Since the day I made love to you,
I never told you the truth.
The truth is that I am in love with you.

The author's comments:
To this very day, I am still in love with you.

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on Dec. 14 2012 at 10:47 pm
Inoui_Fou BRONZE, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
the best kind of people are the ones that make you feel uncomfortable, in a good way.

Absolute Bravo! You can feel the connection between the too lovers.

on Oct. 8 2012 at 12:56 pm
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Such a lovely poem :) You can feel emotion in the poem too, which is hard to do. I really love this, well done xx

on Oct. 8 2012 at 6:24 am
SamanthaJames, Polangui, Other
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awe so sweet :) really cute. I love it.