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Thin Ice

November 2, 2012
By Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times, so long as one remembers to turn on the light.

You, exactly like thin ice, so deceptively calm on the outside,while churning with unseen dangers underneath it all,waiting to break underneath someone.

you burst, your rage breaking loose washing over someone hurting them,making them run away,not talk to you for a few days as the ice rebuilds,as you go saying that they're spreading rumurs about you when they only tell the truth

after a few days the ice finally rebuilds and he comes back to you, only to start the cycle all over again.And eventually, he won't come back because he's tired of this merciless cycle.

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dedicated to my frind

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 4:03 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I said this to OldYoungOne in her poem Shell. We see the outside but don't see the inside. I love your message here.