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November 8, 2012
By dianepoon PLATINUM, Hong Kong, Other
dianepoon PLATINUM, Hong Kong, Other
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I watched the sky
free of clouds painted
on my windows getting dimmer
with strokes of blue
added layer after layer by the fading sun.
The color of sadness crawled
along every inch of my bedroom
as if it could become an endless,
unchanging wallpaper
promising its eternal attachment to the
pale cold concrete.
Next to the stiffness were
warm rest and soft sheets where
I hid myself in, and gained
protection from tenderness.
Slowly blinded by murk
and left with
the growing sense of touch,
I imagined it was 6 on a winter morning
when the sun had just
opened his eyes.
And I struggled to deceive myself it
was gradually

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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 2 2014 at 8:02 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Super lovely images, rich and detailed. 

on Dec. 28 2013 at 2:54 am
dianepoon PLATINUM, Hong Kong, Other
27 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Explanation kills art

on Nov. 10 2013 at 1:34 pm
gowiththefl0 SILVER, Passau, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"It is not in the stars to hold our destiny but in ourselves"
-William Shakespeare

I'm having a hard time interpreting this poem, if anyone could help explain that would be wonderful :)!