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She's Gone MAG

December 10, 2012
By HiddengoldTee SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
HiddengoldTee SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Procrastination was created to give you time for the things that you'd otherwise have no time for"

Pulling my sleeve to drag me to
deepest desires
Brought me to the train tracks
Our hair flew
The train was close
When it passed, jumped the gate
And ran to a small shallow puddle
Scraped aside the mud
And revealed to me
Deepest desires.
A knotted worn shopping bag
Pulled apart by broken square nails.
Follow your dreams, I thought
As two coal eyes burned bright
And she did
And she's gone.

The author's comments:
As I sat in the train and watched backyards pass, I was reminded of an old friend.

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This article has 5 comments.

Lokelani said...
on Apr. 16 2013 at 6:58 pm
I really like this poem. I especially love the ending. Keep it up, please!!!

on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:36 pm
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
10 articles 2 photos 55 comments
I really like your poem it really good it remind me of a friend once more a boy friend thou heee. Anyway keep make more poem thou

jeane said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:27 pm
I felt a deep heart warming emotion with a touch of sadness. When reading your poem it remind of a friend  as well more of a boyfriend in a way really hee. I really like it thou keep making more 

on Dec. 26 2012 at 8:23 pm
everybody-needs-some-body-to-love, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:

nice hun very good i loved it and it was really short wich makes me love it anymore haha lol

Skornik67 said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 6:58 pm
Reminded me of my own memories nice work could use some more description I think