Rainbow | Teen Ink


December 30, 2012
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

The rainbow appears but not often,
Giving an upbeat to the beauty,
The hearts of the people soften,
As they exclaim, "What a beauty!"

The author's comments:
It came into my mind, when I was reflecting about rainbow. I have seen it twice in real-time.

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on Apr. 22 2013 at 2:53 am
PriyaModi BRONZE, Indore, Other
1 article 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
I like the way i am,need no transformation,,,LOVE LIFE.

Short and sweet..

on Apr. 20 2013 at 1:58 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

hmmm did you mean to repeat "beauty"? anyways, i liked the dialogue happening in this. interesting! XD

BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2013 at 2:51 pm
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

Loved it.. short and sweet...

on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:05 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

short, sweet amazing to the last word

on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:12 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
2 articles 4 photos 23 comments
Brilliant (:

on Apr. 3 2013 at 5:19 pm
gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
15 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ~ Moulin Rouge

Beautiful, truely beautiful. Keep up the good work. :)

on Mar. 24 2013 at 4:02 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

beatuful and delightful ..... love how you kept it simple, still got the whole thought out......

on Feb. 17 2013 at 11:00 am
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 342 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

This one is okay. It feels very repetitive when you use the word beautiful twice. the poem is to small for that. 

on Feb. 15 2013 at 12:58 am
fromtheashes GOLD, ~~~~~, Montana
14 articles 6 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I took the road less traveled, and that has made all the difference"~Robert Frost

really beautiful

Monicaa GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2013 at 12:03 pm
Monicaa GOLD, North Las Vegas, Nevada
11 articles 0 photos 27 comments
I Love How It's Short And Simple But Yet Beautiful <3 Nice Job :)

on Jan. 16 2013 at 11:17 am
loveshersheys, Lahore, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments
beautifully written poem. I love it!

on Jan. 15 2013 at 2:31 pm
LyricLove SILVER, Webster City, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the skies the limit when there are foot prints on the moon."

Short, sweet, and simple! Love it!

MysticLady said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 11:41 pm
MysticLady, Estancia, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it

Im in an organization for girls called the Rainbow Girls and this is very touching to me. its really good. May i show it to some of my friends in my organization?