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First Kiss

February 15, 2013
By KrisNoe GOLD, Mayfield, Kentucky
KrisNoe GOLD, Mayfield, Kentucky
16 articles 7 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't pay no mind to the demons. They fill you with fear.
- Phillip Phillips

I'm waiting for you
To make a move
You don't lean in
So I do.
You look away
My head sways
My hair drops in my face
You smooth it away with fingers soft as lace
Your lips meet mine
It makes me lose my mind
It only lasted a second.

The author's comments:
This is about my first kiss with mi corazon (my heart). Please rate and comment.

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on Feb. 18 2013 at 2:05 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

Very nice, normally I like my poems to flow towards the end. But in this I can make an exception for the twist at the end. Keep writing

on Feb. 18 2013 at 1:54 am
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Wonderful! I like the twist at the end, that the kiss only lasted for a second!