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A Lovelier Sunrise

February 19, 2013
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.


When the first ray of the waking sun
Penetrates the tranquil dew drop,
Dwelling on the jade leaf of a beautiful red rose,
Your cherubic face will hover,
Blushing baby pink over the flower...
A lovelier sunrise in Kashmir;
And in those exotic eyes of yours,
I behold the very sun;
Glowing gloriously as ever.



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necci SILVER said...
on Mar. 28 2013 at 9:54 am
necci SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
-Women are many things to humans, but the one thing they are not is dominated by men.
-If a single act of hate can do so much damage, what can a single act of kindness do?

beautiful, that is a very skillfully written poem

on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:10 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you anonymous. :) looking forward to reading your poetry ;)

on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:07 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:06 am
AnonymousLoveLetter BRONZE, Chicago Hights, Illinois
4 articles 2 photos 4 comments
That is beautiful. I like the words you used for the detail of the poem. Its like I can see it as an oil painting with the perfect colors. Well done.

on Mar. 5 2013 at 8:05 am
Five-oom BRONZE, Hopeton DC, Other
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
My attitude is that if you push me towards something that you think is a weakness, then I will turn that perceived weakness into a strength.
-Michael Jordan

Great Work!! Keep Going!!

on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:56 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :)  

on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:52 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Its really beautiful!! I could feel every word in the poem. nice flow! 

on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:44 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you, Sabeen :)

on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:42 am
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER, Karachi, Other
9 articles 10 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want something you have never had,
You have got to do something, You have never done!

awww...beautiful.. (take this 'awww' as when you see a cute baby) kepp on writing.. :)