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Unbreakable Love

April 11, 2013
By romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns

I didn’t break any commandment, I didn’t make any crime

Yes, I love a women who older than just my age,
Why do people say no? why the closer ones say-

‘’ you’re taking the path of suffer’’, ‘’you are a great fool’’
But, how can I be a fool, when with her love this heart is vigorous & fool?

Was the prophet a fool?

Was Shakespeare a fool?


Is Obama a fool?
No, I guess not at all, you people are inhuman, acting like an animal
Love, formed with faith, relation, care& understanding given by the god

Love is not an object to buy

When you are into this you just have to learn how to survive

As I did, doing & will do until this war ends

My love, my romance with this girl,

is something that everyone would desire to have
together with my lover we can be vanished deep in the sky

the sky doesn’t care if she’s bigger than me
we’re like a pair of dove flying around & making love

in the heaven we’re the symbol of love


its our love that cant be forgotten forever

The author's comments:
when a boy & a girl falls in love, age difference can't break it

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on Apr. 19 2013 at 11:06 am
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:

I think it's a really nice poem! (You could use some capitalization though.)  Great job!!!