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Nameless poem

May 20, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 433 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I am fallen,
Out of the grace I have deserted,
But that is not why I am who I am
I am fallen not from depression that succumbs me sometimes, Or by the madness of me and this world that twirls and dances within my head shouting for rapture an a way to escape,
I am fallen because I am me,
I am fallen because of my fears of others and only them,
My fears of being anything less than I am meant to be for my love ones,
My fears of not being able to sacrifice myself in order for them to live in this mad world where the strong survive the weak hide,
The fears of becoming nothing and fighting this war alone as it always seems to be,
But this is not all that is to be told of this fallen,
For with my broken wings I learn to fly again,
And with these golden beams I guide my way back from these fears and face the other side of the coin I must bear,
For what if I am a fallen, I am also a Luna, the moon and the stars
I am the happiness of a billowing field and the warmth of the flame sent to protect you,
I am the shy girl that no one notices, But soon I will earn my wings and fly back to where I am to be until then I'm just plain me,
So this poem may me nameless but the words that flow off here have names of them own,
They are called by my many names,

The author's comments:
this is what happens when I just write and add me to it

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This article has 21 comments.

on Jan. 24 2014 at 4:59 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

i stinkin love all of ur writing!!! its amazing! so deep and amazing! makes me want to stop writing myself, and just wait for your poems!

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 27 2013 at 5:44 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I love the reference to your name. Very emotional and heart-wrenching. 

BlottedInk said...
on Aug. 16 2013 at 1:04 pm
BlottedInk, Searsmont, Maine
0 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most wasted day of all is that on which we have not laughed." -Nicholas Chamfort

holy schmoly.... that was SO brilliant and...and... wow. That was really deep, it was lilke you wove those words into each person's brains that reads that and they can have a new take on the poem each time they read it... :) its so cool how this poem is so cool. :) i love it

on Jul. 25 2013 at 10:18 pm
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
14 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

right when you mentioned luna is where i loved it. i Love the stars and the sky and the moon and i loved that verse keep writing fall :)  

on Jul. 25 2013 at 6:07 pm
LittleMissLostInParadise GOLD, Cumberland, Virginia
19 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We live in a strange bubble"
-Brian Molko

Wonderful job! You are truly inspiring! The poem is deep, and well written.

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 4:48 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Wow, this is truly beautiful! I  love all of the metaphorsand its truly an inspiration!!!! Ur a brilliant writer!!!

on Jun. 4 2013 at 9:16 am
frommusicwithlove SILVER, Syracuse, Utah
8 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." By Dr. Seuss

This is honestly really good, I love how you change the sides of your thinking. You should always have a part of you in your writting, over all just greaat job.

alex18 BRONZE said...
on May. 29 2013 at 5:31 pm
alex18 BRONZE, Jersey City, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A certain darkness is needed to see the stars."

you are such a good writer wow

on May. 29 2013 at 5:17 pm
Sarah_Rose17 SILVER, Windsor, Colorado
8 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Remember to trust others, it will one day be your saving grace."

This poem is so beautifully written. Showing not only the importance and simplicity of the fears, but the over coming and depth of them. It's great.

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2013 at 7:57 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you."

"Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, 'I just don't care.'?"

I love how you incoorperated your name into this! So creative! :) Just beautifully written...I can definetly relate

on May. 28 2013 at 3:21 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

tears streaming down my cheak........... this is wonderful exactly how i feel but no one understands...........

on May. 28 2013 at 2:37 pm
Redhead_Squishy BRONZE, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Amazing, heart pounding, ahhhh...i can't put it into descrition. But it was awesome.

on May. 28 2013 at 8:41 am
liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
14 articles 2 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

this kinda sounds like me. 

on May. 28 2013 at 7:38 am
PotterWhoLocked GOLD, Montclair, Virginia
13 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Wednesdays are limbo days. Monday is the beginning of the week, Tuesday is getting used to it, Thursday is looking forward to Friday and Friday is getting ready for the weekend. Wednesdays aren’t really anything in particular. They’re just there.”

This is very well written, and I love the story it tells. I rated five stars.

on May. 27 2013 at 7:25 pm
ScarletteVelveteen PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
40 articles 2 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Creativity is how you tell everything you don't want to say to everyone"

That was really interesting. It was very, very well written! Keep up the good work! I would love it if you would check out some of my stuff? Thanks :))

on May. 27 2013 at 5:44 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there! I enjoy the title, though 'nameless' it has a name. How interesting. It really catches the reader's eye, if not other's, it for sure caught mine. (Ha! A mini-poem.) Anyways, this was much different from most poems I have read. It was like a story, but not in story form. I enjoyed the set-up for what it was. I like how this is about you and the mysterys of yourself. I thought it was even more personal when you included your name. And I enjoyed the repetition of your username. This was a very unique poem. Good job! Would you mind reading my poem, 'The Dance of the Souls', please? Thanks:)

on May. 26 2013 at 5:35 pm
Kaylaa_Nicole_ SILVER, Smyrna, Tennessee
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Awesome, I love the idea that you get across.

on May. 26 2013 at 5:31 pm
KkatKreationz PLATINUM, Minerva, Ohio
31 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken." :)

This is good!!! Luv it! _KKat

on May. 26 2013 at 5:30 pm
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
89 articles 4 photos 197 comments

Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Okay this was absolutely amazing, LOVE YOUR WRITING. <3

on May. 26 2013 at 5:30 pm
KkatKreationz PLATINUM, Minerva, Ohio
31 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken." :)

Wo-Ow. Thats cool!!!! Can you rad my work and tell me what you think?