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One More Day

February 1, 2014
By Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

I wish that I could be with you,
For just One More Day.
And if the opportunity arose,
this is what I'd say.
I'd tell you how much I love you
And how much you mean to me.
I'd tell you how happy I am,
and wonder what our future would be.
But who would have ever thought,
that you, "The shy Guy"
Would be the one keeping me up,
making me cry?
The tears are dry,
But they don't stop falling.
My time is up and,
Heaven is calling.
Got to go now!
The blood is everywhere.
Not that you
Would even care.

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This article has 3 comments.

on Sep. 24 2014 at 5:17 pm
cinclair BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
haven't heard one yet.

I love it. great job 

on Jul. 10 2014 at 8:39 pm
Sparrow01 SILVER, Appalachin, New York
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The ending suprised me, it really makes you feel something.

on May. 4 2014 at 8:57 am
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Like the meaning behind it but the rhyming could have been better because in some places, u did a long line and then rhymed it with a shorter line so it didn't sound right. Still heartfelt tho :)