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Who Am I?

May 2, 2014
By RhiannonH PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
RhiannonH PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
49 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life hands you lemons,make grape juice and then sit back and watch as the world wonders how you did it.


As i lie here
Staring at the ceiling
The silence is screaming in my ears
Making me lose all feelings

Who am I?
Where am I at?
Will I ever find out?
Will I ever get back?

What happened?
I was doing so well
Did I make a wrong turn?
'Cause now life is hell

Hour after Hour
I spend them alone
Stuck in this place
This place that's not my home

Flower after Flower
I pick the petals off
People watching,wondering
If and when I'll go off

Accusation after Accusation
They just never stop
"We just want to help you!"
"Please! Don't give up!"

Paper after Paper
I don't want them anymore
But they keep on coming
Getting passed under the door



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on Jul. 15 2014 at 6:38 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

I agree with GraceHalvo3740 IT kinda leaves free room for the readers to relate. I like it it's awesome ;)

on Jun. 11 2014 at 5:25 pm
GraceHalvo3740 BRONZE, Rapid City, South Dakota
3 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
By three methods we may learn wisdom: first, by reflection, which is noblest; second, by imitation, which is easiest; and third by experience, which is the bitterest.

I like it. It doesn't specifically say what the person is struggling with so it gives the reader a little bit a wiggle room to relate. :) 

on May. 25 2014 at 8:01 pm
RhiannonH PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
49 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life hands you lemons,make grape juice and then sit back and watch as the world wonders how you did it.

thanks so much

on May. 11 2014 at 3:21 pm
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

Very nicee flow (: