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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on May. 19 at 12:37 pm
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"I wanna feel handsome, and i wanna feel pretty"

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This is really good!! I had tries in my eyes!!

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Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM, Kington, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There is something infinitely healing in the repeated refrains of nature—the assurance that dawn comes after night, and spring after winter. —Rachel Carson

This is such a beautiful piece, it's so sad!

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on May. 25 2021 at 11:22 am
Varshavimal, San Jose, California
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"Start writing, no matter what happens"

Great work!

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on Jun. 8 2020 at 5:58 am
Maylis, Aix-En-Provence, Other
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Very well written. We go into your story, we put ourselves in your shoes and we feel the same way.

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Ling Ling 40 hours----TwoSet Violins

AmaZiNg!!!

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on Jul. 3 2019 at 7:04 pm
starzx, Manhattan, New York
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Your words are strong and your descriptions are heartbreaking and vivid. I love it!

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cat_the_creative GOLD, Austin, Texas
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All endings are beginnings

SO AMAZING WOAH I CRIED!

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lexi_bad, Glendal, Arizona
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this is amazing keep it up and stay strong

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lexi_bad, Glendal, Arizona
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@penboy6 read this

on Jun. 30 2018 at 8:50 am
WritingTheWriteWay PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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"They laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at them because they're all the same"(Kurt Cobain).

Exqusite poem, I feel your pain, my father passed away when I was four. I have a bunch of half siblings, but no full ones. It makes it worse because I just feel so alone in my situation, I would say I miss him, but I don't remeber him. I wish I had solething to miss.

on Jun. 16 2018 at 4:58 pm
ShrivastavaM SILVER, Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself no matter what

That's so sad but thats what makes it so special.
I am so emotional after reading it. I feel bad for you

on May. 15 2018 at 8:55 am
PunderfullyMade BRONZE, Elizabethton, Tennessee
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I love it! I can relate. Your word choice is simply beautiful :).

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This is super powerful

on Mar. 1 2018 at 12:20 pm
TabithaL SILVER, Suffolk, Virginia
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"Speak only if it improves upon the silence"- Mahatma Gandhi

Your tone and language and voice all work so well together. I'm amazed. Good job.

on Feb. 22 2018 at 1:13 pm
MaddieGrizz SILVER, Lake Isabella, California
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Wow this is powerful and emotional I love it! I can relate to losing someone it's rough I know. Your writing is flawless. If you can, please look at my poem called reality.

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Be proud of who you are.
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Ooh, somebody stop me!
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on Jan. 18 2018 at 8:37 am
Elizabeth2001 BRONZE, Durand, Michigan
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“Your hardest times often lead to the greatest moments of your life. Keep going. Tough situations build strong people in the end.”

This made me cry because I can relate to losing my mother and hearing people say they hate they're mothers and I just want to be like a least you have on to come home to. You should keep writing you did a good job.

Fantastic poem,very nice

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Every Time I even think of you, all those bad memories just fade away, 'cause your smile's enough, you're enough...

That is the best poem ever, like for real.