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The girl with the smile

April 15, 2015
37 articles 3 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only you can start a change you want"

The girl with the smile
has much to hide.

She is a girl with the eyes
that glow with lies.

She is a girl with no hope
going on without pride.

The girl with the smile
cried before she died.

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on Jun. 14 2015 at 6:27 pm
JazzyB2002 SILVER, Sauk Centre, Minnesota
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who actually do."
-Steve Jobs

I really believe you have talent!

gbremer SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2015 at 10:31 am
gbremer SILVER, Carlton, Minnesota
6 articles 11 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is both a blessing and a curse to feel everything so very deeply.

It's beautiful and simple. It's easy to understand.

on May. 14 2015 at 3:52 pm
SugarLover127 SILVER, Hartville, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where is personal gain and perseverance without a couple failures?

This is beautiful, I absolutely beautiful!

on Apr. 21 2015 at 2:12 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
32 articles 9 photos 525 comments

Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

I like the feeling here, but I think you could have gone into even more detail with it. What I like the most right now, though, is the brevity and the last lines. You have a hard-hitting poem here with a good message, so don't worry too much about it. Good job!

on Apr. 19 2015 at 7:54 pm
EvalynnHeather GOLD, Clemmons, North Carolina
16 articles 4 photos 64 comments
That was really good, short and simple. Please check out my poetry if you can, anybody!

on Apr. 19 2015 at 11:28 am
Scorpio07 SILVER, Hertfordshire, Other
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are many launguages around the world, but a smile speaks them all - Unknown

I really enjoyed reading this. Short, sweet and to the point. I loved the simplicity of it :) Feel free to check out any of my poetry!

on Apr. 18 2015 at 8:06 pm
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
74 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

I really liked it. It held much emotion and it touched something that is so very true.

on Apr. 18 2015 at 12:14 pm
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
29 articles 0 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

Well, I'm not one for telling length or style because we all have our own lol this was good XD short, straight, and to the point lol like muchie :)

on Apr. 17 2015 at 10:00 am
LotusChild PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
32 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let them hate, so long as they fear me" ~Colligula

Well done, perhaps some more imagery would be nice, but otherwise I liked it.