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December 10, 2010
By snapesminion SILVER, San Jose, California
snapesminion SILVER, San Jose, California
5 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dude. Yes. Now."

Still a bit sleepy
I open up my window
And taste the morning

The author's comments:
This was just for fun. I write as I think of things. This just makes me feel warm and cozy, as if I were still in my PJs and were just waking up to a new day.

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This article has 8 comments.

on Nov. 1 2015 at 9:48 pm
ItsTimeToBegin PLATINUM, Lexington, Massachusetts
29 articles 0 photos 49 comments
Really nice! I'll recite this in my head each time I wake up in the morning :)

on Apr. 20 2013 at 12:20 pm
annafranna BRONZE, Eldersburg, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." ~Dr. Seuss

I love how you used the word "taste" in the last line.  I know exactly what you mean!

on Feb. 14 2013 at 7:25 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Very nice and refreshing! Good job!

on Jan. 27 2013 at 8:13 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
42 articles 9 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

I feel so refreshed after reading this!  I'm going to have to try and do that the next time I wake up.  Nice work!

on Dec. 15 2011 at 8:01 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1398 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Reminds me of what I do in the morning to wake myself up and greet the day~

on Sep. 5 2011 at 6:35 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

This is a good haiku with a refreshing thought! First of all, it's not like you can see positive poems everyday. Second, it's kinda hard making a haiku or putting your thoughts into three limited lines. But you made a great haiku!!! This is one of the best. Keep writing! :">

snapesminion said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 1:46 pm
thanks! that was my goal. :)

lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2011 at 7:57 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:

this was really good it made me feel all cozy and all