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Mother and Daughter MAG

July 13, 2011
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I act so mature
Playing with my mother's hair
Making her feel young

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on Aug. 24 2011 at 7:37 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

aw, this is so sweet and touching, and somehow still short. keep writing. :)

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:22 am
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 388 comments
Short, simple, but very meaningful. Good job!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 4:26 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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I like it. It's simple, yet deep.

on Jul. 21 2011 at 5:05 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I don't think mature and playing go along together. This is a good haiku anyway. If only I'm so sweet to a mother...