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Designer Rain

March 17, 2013
By AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.


Heavens burst and the
Raindrops paint pretty polka
Dots on open hands.



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on May. 23 2013 at 3:40 pm
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
22 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

I like the "open hands" part the best. An important piece to add!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 2:20 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1136 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Sweet subtle beauty! The imagery is so vivid and exactly the way I LOVE... This is a tad bit similar to a poem of mine "See through the raindrops" but thats free-verse..and my second try at free verse and is about the raindrops as sort of kaleidoscopes..... Well not exactly but you might like it....

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2013 at 12:51 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

Beautiful.

on Mar. 26 2013 at 6:19 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Mar. 26 2013 at 5:05 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 153 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

How sweet is the poem! I just love the picture it paints as I read. 

on Mar. 26 2013 at 4:12 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Hahaha :D yeah :P

on Mar. 24 2013 at 2:33 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Your poem was really good too! Thanks :)

Dunes SILVER said...
on Mar. 23 2013 at 12:07 pm
Dunes SILVER, Leander, Texas
5 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A room without books is like a body without soul." -Marcus Tullius Cicero

So much better than I could ever do....

on Mar. 23 2013 at 9:12 am
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
27 articles 0 photos 425 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

And...just realized my comment had 17 syllables..thats so weird... (ok, i'll admit, that one was on purpose)

on Mar. 23 2013 at 12:41 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

on Mar. 22 2013 at 7:28 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
27 articles 0 photos 425 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Cool, cute haiku :) Wish I could say more, but for 17 sylables...

on Mar. 22 2013 at 12:45 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thank you :)

Khaoula BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2013 at 1:34 pm
Khaoula BRONZE, Annaba, Other
2 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
" be you ... simply one of your kind "^_^

aww love the rain <3

on Mar. 21 2013 at 9:55 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Glad you liked it :) Thanks :)  

on Mar. 21 2013 at 9:55 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

thank you :) I was just listening to some really good piano (Yiruma) and thought of this :)

on Mar. 21 2013 at 8:55 am
nakubara PLATINUM, Belvidere, New Jersey
27 articles 18 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything you do in life is insignificant, but its important you do it anyway ~Ghandi

Really good! (I normally hate haikus) yours is great!

on Mar. 21 2013 at 8:48 am
Kimberly Behling, Ehrhardt, South Carolina
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i think it is really awesome did it take long to write about rain drops?? but is tremendously awesome lol :)))

on Mar. 21 2013 at 12:25 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
36 articles 0 photos 265 comments

Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

Thanks, Swan :)

on Mar. 21 2013 at 12:21 am
WhiteSwan13 SILVER, Hawera, Other
8 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing is Impossible & We Live and Learn

Awesome haiku :)