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El Ojo de Dios (God's Eye)

March 9, 2014
By 411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

El cielo de la
Noche es el ojo de
Dios–sin el fin

The night sky is God's eye–endless

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on Mar. 22 2014 at 2:41 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1136 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

This is espanol? LEXY! It feels like it's been so long that I haven't been here. I've missed you much. How've you been? By the way, though I don't know Spanish. The thought in the poem is simply gorgeous hence I love it. Great work. You have quickly become one of my favourite Haiku writer's on here! Have you read some of Mckay's? They're reallly awesome. I'm sure you have. Just checkin ;) Anyway I LOVE THIS!