Spring | Teen Ink


April 26, 2015
By BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
BoobooBeetle DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
74 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A good novel tells us the truth about its hero; but a bad novel tells us the truth about its author.”
G.K. Chesterton

"And you, you ridiculous people, you expect me to help you."
Denis Johnson

Life engulfs the land,

Blooming lively trees painted

An enchanting green.

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on May. 18 2015 at 12:36 am
ThePoeticJustice PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Hold fast and keep your head up high for life will pass right by you like a speeding bird if you don't acknowledge it- Charles Moorer III (me)

I'm liking it, simple, elegant, I think I'll call you the Haiku king (or queen, we know of no genders) XD keep writing lol

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on May. 17 2015 at 8:04 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
3 articles 0 photos 516 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

I love the gorgeous imagery in this poem. This is a perfect example of what I meant in my comment to your "Deck of Cards." The verbs and word choice create a fluid blossoming of this image of spring. Well done!

on May. 7 2015 at 10:03 pm
MysticMusic ELITE, Waterloo, Other
116 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
“You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.” -Mae West
"It had long since come to my attention that people of accomplishment rarely sat back and let things happen to them. They went out and happened to things." - Leonardo Da Vinci

Beautiful descriptions paired up with images that just blossom in my mind. I think this should be considered a piece of art. It's bursting with life and energy.