Fireflight | Teen Ink


June 1, 2009
By Lily Wilf BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
Lily Wilf BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
1 article 0 photos 0 comments

Zooming, diving, aaand you miss
To catch me in this dark abyss
June, July and August fun
But you can’t see me in the sun
You try, you fail. Give in I won’t.
Now you see me, now you don’t.

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bree_bree GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 12:38 pm
bree_bree GOLD, Auburn, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
mistakes are made to be learned from.

it an amazing piece of work and i enjoyed reading it.

on Jan. 26 2011 at 4:30 pm
leonajordan BRONZE, Fort Walton Beach, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never give up, when you're down, get up and try again.

I don't think yooh shud change anything bowt dis poem...It AWSUM ! ! ! ! I enjoy reading it. I read it bowt 50 timez! (;

on Jan. 29 2010 at 8:09 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

It may not be the common version of a limerick, but who says it has to be? I like it!

Greenlam[ said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 4:51 pm
i dont think it should be number 1 or 2

lilywilf said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 4:55 pm
It is not modeled after a set beat. It is its own pattern.

Greenlamp said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 3:43 pm
it is suppose to be 5 lines and the pattern is suppose to be aabba not aabbaa

Winter2124 said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 2:17 pm
It is a awesome poem with lots of rhyme.

on Dec. 16 2009 at 11:55 am
Colorful4u SILVER, Orange, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around."
-Leo Buscagilia

I love the beat :D