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My World Turned Around

February 1, 2010
By smileyleah PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
smileyleah PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
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When the truth came out
and the silence grew
when the sky turned gray
and the wind just blew

i sat there in the corner
while you were in the crowd
my heart was in crumbles
and you acted very proud

my world was dark
while yours was light
but i was the one hurt
and it doesnt seem right

you left my lonely
with no hand to hold
for the tears drip down
wet and cold

but cold is the word for you
and nothing more
my world was in pieces
and with us you shut the door

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on Feb. 18 2010 at 9:34 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

amazing. honest, pure, a little sad, but very VERY good :) bravo! check out some of my work if you could, i love the feedback. keep writing :) i like your style!

on Feb. 18 2010 at 3:23 pm
Karlynne PLATINUM, Orange Park, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain.
-Vivian Greene

very beuatiful! i love your writing!! check out mine sometime. appreciated much!