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Breaking Free

September 16, 2009
By ixClusive BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
ixClusive BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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You painted a fake smile on my face.
I never asked you a question and that was the case.
You told me that you would mold me into your picture perfect girl.
You said you would train me to live in your picture perfect world.
But i had to break free away from you.
I had to fine love that was real and true.
I had to break away from your control.
I had to break away from your tight hold.
I have to live my life for me.
I got to live my life i know it was meant to be.

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem because i know alot of female has felt trap in a realationship and they don't really know how to get out of it, but they know that it was time for them to let go and live their life for themself and no one esle.

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on Oct. 19 2011 at 3:01 pm
Shortblueeyes224 DIAMOND, Auburntown, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Are We Happy Plastic People"- Casting Crowns "While we're sung to sleep by philosophies that save the trees and kill the children" - Casting Crowns "It's such a secret place, the land of tears"Antoine de Saint-Exupery

Good Job :) keep it up

hurtangel said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 4:23 pm
i can totally relate to this. i just got out of a relationship like this. :)

on Sep. 28 2009 at 3:45 pm
Teiralovessugar SILVER, Sweet Home, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
" Never Underestimate the Power of LOVE!"

I know exactly what you mean, girl. Good job!!