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As I have sunk in the ocean of tears

September 21, 2023
By WaheedKhan SILVER, Karachi, Other
WaheedKhan SILVER, Karachi, Other
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"If the words are your and have more viewers is just like a river"
(Written by Waheed Khan 25-12-2022 )

As I have attached to my innocent dear,

The Face of one is directly changed fast,


My Relation to the one is my mistaken tear,

When I came to know, that is not ever last,


It was slumber of me that he is far so loyal, 

I am useless without the reality of the faces,


It is like little boat near to big and fast yawl,

Which can be directly crashed by the traces,


Not only I am full under the control of my dear,

But also captivated by my all hopes of the one,


Neither I have became the obsolete none one by near,

Nor these are the actions of dear but seem clear one,


No!, No, my heart is lier this one dear totally made me mad,

Look at my heart, it is flattering of dear who made me mad.

The author's comments:

As I have seen the differ faces of others and my relation with them is useless.On the other hand, they filled me up with tears and left me alone by completing their own benifits from me.

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on Nov. 13 at 12:43 pm
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on Sep. 27 at 5:59 am
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