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"If It Ends"

September 23, 2009
By CiaoB3lLa GOLD, North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
CiaoB3lLa GOLD, North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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My love for you is never equal,
its just the beginning of our end.
The end of out life, and the end of our death;
as the fire burned and the flood slept.
Till the moon shakes and the earth crumbles,
what good would we be if we crossed no trouble.
So here i stay in your arms of love, here very warm with a nice soft cuddle.
But till that day i stand before myself, i will have thought of you as i take my last helpless breath.
i will fall through the stars and between the skies, still thinking of you as i pass through the depths of freedom into you open arms once again.

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on Sep. 27 2022 at 12:15 pm
PoisonIvy22 SILVER, Windom, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"In the public eye, girls and women with strong perspectives are hated. If you're a girl with an opinion, people just hate you. There are still people who are afraid of successful women, and that's so lame." -Billie Eilish
"My imagination is a twisted place." -Taylor Swift
“ When people see good they expect good and I don't want to live up to some one's expectations." - Damon Salvatore, 'The Vampire Diaries'.

This is so beautiful!

on Jul. 26 2014 at 11:06 am
Lysander PLATINUM, Bangalore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I slay.

Gr8 poem! Luvd it!

on Feb. 9 2013 at 1:58 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

This is a good poem, but it's jsut not in sonnet format. Try submitting it under a different categoyr. I really love it, though!