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One Whisper

August 15, 2011
By Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
16 articles 0 photos 98 comments

There is a sound in my ear.
That is close to my heart.
A sound no would recall.
It is a noise in the dark.

It is below normal range.
A secret for two.
No one would understand,
Because it is between me and you.

Facial expression become changed,
Eyes wonder back and forth.
Curiosity has swept the air,
For people know what hush tones are worth.

The tone is soft and gentle.
Starts slow and then quicker.
You now have my heart,
All because of one whisper.

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on Jul. 14 2012 at 10:35 pm
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Truely poetic!

Keep writing,


on Mar. 21 2012 at 11:51 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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I love it! This might be my favorite poem of yours. It's written so beautifully! Great Job!

on Sep. 28 2011 at 5:46 pm
Myvoice4change SILVER, Other, Other
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"Everything will be ok in the end. If it's not okay, it's not the end."

this is well written (:

on Aug. 24 2011 at 4:53 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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i really like this, it almost feels like there is so muchmore beneatht the words and that the whole story isn't being told. It's mysterious, which i love!

on Aug. 23 2011 at 9:19 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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This is such a cute poem! I like it :)

on Aug. 20 2011 at 10:46 am
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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exacally ! :) thank you

on Aug. 20 2011 at 2:04 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

I like this poem. Sometimes, hush sounds are what speaks louder!

on Aug. 20 2011 at 12:15 am
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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thank you ! :)

on Aug. 19 2011 at 8:55 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
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This is really good! :)