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A empty room

August 16, 2011
By Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
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I used to love nature.
Watch a flower grow and bloom.
Now I am all alone
Here in an empty room.

I used to love to play.
The suns rays, i used to consume.
But even the sun himself has left me
Here in an empty room.

I suppose because it has reasons.
To which I do presume.
To leave me here to die,
Here in an empty room.

"Or perhaps maybe not"
I say, as i build my tomb.
And yet, what does it matter? I am
Here in an empty room.

Farewell to anyone who hears me.
I speak with great volume.
I shall see you in another life, or perhaps,
Here in an empty room.

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on Mar. 21 2012 at 11:40 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

This is a really great poem! The rhyming made it flow very well. The meaning behind it seems so complex and sad, but i totally understand it. The second to last stanza seems a bit weaker than the rest of the poem. Other than that, I love it! PLus, the picture is perfect! It's always hard for me to find a picture that fits my poems so yeah, ik just noticed that. lol 

lkijascuh said...
on Sep. 28 2011 at 6:45 pm
lkijascuh, Lkn, Other
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I LOVE IT! it is so touching you are amazing

on Aug. 28 2011 at 12:32 pm
billlover420 GOLD, Justin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Boy, when you're dead, they really fix you up. I hope to hell when I do die somebody has sense enough to just dump me in the river or something. Anything except sticking me in a goddam cemetery.  People coming and putting a bunch of flowers on your stomach on Sunday, and all that crap. Who wants flowers when you're dead? Nobody. ~J.D. Salinger,The Catcher in the Rye,

is very good your a stunning writter :) <3

Atarla GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 6:23 pm
Atarla GOLD, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason, And nothing is without one

I like it, very well written

on Aug. 23 2011 at 9:20 pm
AlaskaFrost GOLD, Acushnet, Massachusetts
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I really like this poem! It has a good flow to it. Keep writing!!