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Victoria

February 21, 2010
By sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 255 comments

This is a sketch I did of a girl. Not really sure whether or not it would be considered 'anime'.


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C.M.L. BRONZE said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 5:09 pm
C.M.L. BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
wobbledy wobbledy wa wobble wobble

The only thing I wrote in the first place was constructive criticism and I do believe it was good criticism; everything was written to try to improve the drawing. I am not putting down the piece, I'm simply readjusting the perspective from which you see it. I also didn't say that just because it wasn't mind blowing it wasn't good. In fact, right after I mentioned that, I even said "It's a good start." Jesus. 

I also suggest checking your spelling and grammar more often.

 I'm done replying to this thread.


StoryLover said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:59 pm
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
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Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

And because her art is'nt mind blowing dose'nt mean its not good...

StoryLover said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:58 pm
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

I mean reply to a comment.

StoryLover said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:57 pm
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

sorry about this post and the one below....I like messed up...hehe sorry. (it was suposed to be a comment)

StoryLover said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:56 pm
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

Yah I looked at some of your art porybrows...and yah its really good...but that dosent mean that everyone can draw like you...you obviously hurt her feelings a little so I just felt I should look at the positves not the negitives like some people do....I mean the glass is always half full with me......not .half empty.

StoryLover said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:56 pm
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

Yah I looked at some of your art porybrows...and yah its really good...but that dosent mean that everyone can draw like you...you obviously hurt her feelings a little so I just felt I should look at the positves not the negitives like some people do....I mean the glass is always half full with me......not .half empty.

StoryLover said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:54 pm
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

Yah I looked at some of your art porybows...and yah its really good...but that dosent mean that everyone can draw like you...you obviously hurt her feelings a little so I just felt I should look at the positves not the negitives like some people do....I mean the glass is always half full with me......not half empty.....and just because her art is not "Mindblowing" does'nt mean its not good....

on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:44 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 255 comments
Thanks for the great criticism! Drawing anime isnt my greatest forte. This was actually one of my first that I tried :) but really thanks for all the tips. I will be surero keep those in mind if I try something else like this :D check out some of my other newer drawings that I have posted one here and tell me what you think! It seems that I've been getting commets on ONLY this one and it's not my strongest! :)

on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:21 pm
4everyoung15 BRONZE, Moreno Valley, California
3 articles 2 photos 76 comments

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"When life knocks you down on your knees, just remember you are in the perfect position for praying"- Unknown

i wanna cry its sooooooooooooooooo beautiful!!!!

im not alone! ur were 10x bettr than me in the 7th grade 

<envy>

well the design is gorgeous, but if u still draw... try to get the body proportions better.. i mean anime IS exageratted, but u dont want it to look too exagerated. Anime gurls do have big forheads,  so try that out..

also... bodies are pretty simply to proportionize, just remember...

elbows are at the diaphram

wrists line up to the crotch

and the leg starts at the waist

dont worry, i made my anime characters too skinny also.... 

but u find how to fix that eventually, nd maybe u have. have fun nd keep it up!!!! (^ ^)


on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:14 pm
4everyoung15 BRONZE, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
"When life knocks you down on your knees, just remember you are in the perfect position for praying"- Unknown

ill check it out wat is it?

on Aug. 15 2011 at 8:00 pm
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 255 comments
Ok people I don't plan on becoming a famous artist. It's just a hobby. Wow. I mean I drew this in 7th grade give me a break. Do you people even LOOK at some of my newer pieces? No reason to make someone feel down here.

vivianli32 said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 5:05 pm
vivianli32, San Jose, California
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prepare yourself because this is, quite literally, nothing compared to what you find on deviant art.

C.M.L. BRONZE said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 2:19 pm
C.M.L. BRONZE, San Jose, California
3 articles 4 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
wobbledy wobbledy wa wobble wobble

I most certainly can draw something like this. Hit me up if you really want to see. Also, no need to get all defensive; I appreciate her effort and was just offering helpful comments, since I've seen truly amazing art. Like mind-blowing. It's a good start.

StoryLover said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 11:08 am
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

yah well I think she did good considering not many people can draw like this....I would like to see you draw something like this....personaly I think its great..:)

StoryLover said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 11:07 am
StoryLover, Fenton, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Our gratest glory is not failing....but getting up every time we do.

I think this is a very good manga drawing...I would personaly consider this Anime or Manga.....But I think it is very good.....like supper uber good...like all the sucky comments you get are WRONG!!!!!

on Jul. 2 2011 at 7:48 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 373 comments

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"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

I love it! The dress is so detailed and I especially like the fingernails!

on Jul. 2 2011 at 1:03 pm
prettylittlewriter BRONZE, Villa Park, California
2 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
These violent delights have violent ends.

This is beautiful. I love her Victorian style dress. You are so talented!

Keeper6 GOLD said...
on May. 19 2011 at 5:00 pm
Keeper6 GOLD, Buffalo, Minnesota
16 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak, sometimes it just means you are strong enough to let go.

reminds me of an angry bride..i like it

C.M.L. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 1:37 am
C.M.L. BRONZE, San Jose, California
3 articles 4 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
wobbledy wobbledy wa wobble wobble

Proportion, proportion, proportion!
Her hands should end about mid-thigh, she needs a ribcage and hips, and the dress is too flat. I understand that cloth is a pain in the butt to draw, so try looking up more examples of how it flows; it's not just rows of nearly parallel lines.

on Apr. 4 2011 at 10:55 am
sany.lastflame PLATINUM, Frederick, Colorado
33 articles 16 photos 255 comments
Ok thanks for the critisism but you know you could have been more polite instead of saying "It sucks". Sorry that I'm not as good as you :D