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September 23, 2009
By Jesus Monreal BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
Jesus Monreal BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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I wholeheartedly agree with Kira Jorgensen Duus in her article," Got a Cold." I liked this poem because when I get a cold I can relate to it. Also, it was written in a way that it rhymes well. Having a cold is a terrible feeling one gets, and the following line goes well with what I believe," This may be a day of of minuses." Thank you, Kira Jorgensen Duus for writing this excellent article.


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