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Hungry Eyes

February 4, 2013
By Anonymous

I see it on her face everyday.
The pain of an empty stomach.

EMPTY EYES,

wandering the hallways,
taking stairs two at a time,
counting calories.

CRYING EYES,

when the monster gnaws on nothing.
Warm hands and hugs,
try to comfort,
try to feed, to no avail.
She stares in blind defeat,
at a body bursting with
imperfections.

WORRIED EYES,

when she sees the lectures and pamphlets in health.
The documentaries in history.

LONGING EYES,

hen she stares at the magazine covers,
wanting that,
photo-shopped figure.

and

HUNGRY EYES,

when all she wishes for,
is a normal life.



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on Apr. 2 2013 at 7:27 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Thanx lexusmarie! I am glad that you got over it! I just love stories with happy-ish endings. This is not happening t me, but rather to a freind of sorts. I am just trying to help her get through

on Apr. 2 2013 at 7:14 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is very good, so raw and emotional! I like your rhythm and the breaks in bold. 5/5!!

on Apr. 2 2013 at 7:06 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

This is great.. you are TRULY an amazing writer. I love the way that this is set up.. you really get the point across and made me think. I used to be the same way, but I know how unhealthy it is and I realized that although I wanted to be happy, this was not the way to go. And I hope that other peopleknow that, too! Love yourself, because you're you and that's all you'll ever be, so make the best of it, and smile. c; Great job! Xx!

on Apr. 2 2013 at 2:15 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Very, very good message.  And the pictures you create really hit it home.  I also really like the way this poem is organized, how it looks.  Overall, this is a really good poem!

on Feb. 27 2013 at 7:28 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

luv u too doll!!!!!

jessbd said...
on Feb. 26 2013 at 9:27 am
lol nice liv you commented on your own peice

yoyoyo said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:19 pm
this is truly beautiful. you inspire me everyday. omg like omg.   stay grizzlin mah man

coolkat said...
on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:13 pm
this is truly the best poem i have ever read. You inspire me. Whoever you are, i love you. Please keep writing. you have a talent

on Feb. 25 2013 at 6:03 pm
Angel-freed PLATINUM, Dallas City, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Love is our true meaning, so show it. Don't be sad because its over, be happy because it happened. -Dr. Seuss; "Pooh will we be friends forever?" asked Piglet, "Even longer." Pooh replied. -Winnie the Pooh

nice