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Moment in time

September 12, 2014
By MaKayla White BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
MaKayla White BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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        My legs shake as a rattle snakes tail while I approached the roller coaster. People behind me screaming on the top of their lungs with excitement about the ride. The loops seem so fierce, I fell like their going so fast that the coaster cars will eventually fall off .I frightenly await for my turn to aboard the coasters. I begin to panic, the coaster cars all the sudden disappear around the building. I hear the hot dark metal poles vibrate loudly while the cars fly past. The coaster cars just like a ragging beast trying to throw passengers from its back, the safety bars look like they close upon you and make you feel a desperate animal in a trap. I see the trill of excitement on the people’s faces after getting off like, I’m glad I’ve survived this!



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ShortyQ said...
on Sep. 12 2014 at 2:55 pm
ShortyQ, Indianapolis, Indiana
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great moment , keep up the good work

on Sep. 12 2014 at 2:55 pm
cAmErOnW BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"never give up"

good work....

on Sep. 12 2014 at 2:48 pm
Lee_Hart BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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great moment continue the work