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Little Girl Lost

September 30, 2011
By Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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She is trying to find out were she belongs and come from.

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Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 9:23 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Thank You! That really means a lot to me when someone really likes my story. Do you have any thing I can read on some of your stuff? Let me know ok! :)
Imy_Spray GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 12:07 am
Imy_Spray GOLD, North Shore City, Other
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I like the idea of the story. It's really cool and original. But some parts were a little mixed up where you had words switched round and sometimes it would switch from present to past tense. Just something to think about I guess :) But don't get me wrong, its great!
Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 5:06 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Do you have anything posted on your stuff at all, I would so love to read them. :)
Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 5:05 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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How can I go back and fix my story, because I don't know how? Can you please help me on that part. :)
emmy1578 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 4:26 pm
emmy1578 BRONZE, Kingsport, Tennessee
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Detail. detail is key. and simply by adding in more events and subplots would be a big help too.
Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 2:49 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Thank You so much for reading my story, but I do have a question though, how can I go back and fix the pages? Or add more pages to them? :) 
emmy1578 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 12:47 am
emmy1578 BRONZE, Kingsport, Tennessee
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i agree! very good outline and plot, just a little more work on the dialogue and details! great story thou(:
Mermaidmissy SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2011 at 11:48 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Thanks I'm so happy you really like it a lot. I will be looking for you stuff to ok. Vote often on my web page. Thank You!! :)
DoloresDarling said...
on Oct. 6 2011 at 4:40 pm
DoloresDarling, Cambridge, Ohio
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I think the story is alright, but I think the dialouge should be made so it can be more believable.

:3 Make sure you have someone check over your work also! It can help with the typos..