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Beautiful Eyes

September 14, 2011
By loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

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I don't wanna give away the plot...mwahahahaha

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This book has 11 comments.

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 11:57 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 108 comments

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Life isn&#039;t about finding yourself it&#039;s about creating yourself-

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I really like the begining to this but I can't seem to go past the prolog.
loveshortstuff11 said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 9:43 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.&quot;

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It is supposed to be set right around the turn of the century, like 1890's
loveshortstuff11 said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 8:43 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.&quot;

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I posted several new chapters, so if you want to read the rest, it will be up as soon as the editors approve it! Thanks for reading :)
loveshortstuff11 said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 8:33 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.&quot;

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Thanks for your comments! I should post the next couple of chapters so that you can find out what happens next lol :)
rubyrose1 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 9:52 am
rubyrose1 BRONZE, Oxford, Mississippi
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&quot;The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.&quot; -Eleanor Roosevelt

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I  thought your story so far was so cute.  I cant wait to hear more about what happens when they meet up after mass. One thing I would recommend is putting it into paragraph form and kinda separating it out, its bit hard to read all together.  Just a few grammar mistakes, but I cant wait for you to continue with it! Good job:)
loveshortstuff11 said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 9:08 am
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.&quot;

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This is set around the 1850-1870's-ish...
Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 11:35 pm
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

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&quot;Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process.&quot; -E.B. White

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I like this a lot! The story is really cute and humorous... but I have a question. Where exactly is this situated? like, the time period?
loveshortstuff11 said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 7:10 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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&quot;Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.&quot;

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lol nice...stupid computer. I hope that you like the rest though :)
loveshortstuff11 said...
on Sep. 22 2011 at 7:10 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.&quot;

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lol...sorry! Not trying to offend...my character just doesn't like her sister. I actually really like red hair, and freckles are cool. :)
writeamongthestars BRONZE said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 7:40 pm
writeamongthestars BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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&quot;Laughter is timeless. Imagination has no age. And dreams are forever.&quot; - Walt Disney Company

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I have carrot-red hair, a long nose, and a lot of freckles. lol... thanks.
Eno_Bladez GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2011 at 4:57 pm
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

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it&#039;ll be okay, if it&#039;s not okay it&#039;s not over.

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i loved reading this i read up to the second chapter before i was brutally kicked off the computer. right now all i have time to do is comment on this then i'm going to have to get on again :P i really liked reading this.