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To Tear A Stone
Summary:
This book tells more then one story, it tells many stories, that are all wrapped up in one and other.
It tells the story of personal wars, mental wars and physical wars.
The plot of my book is quite hard to describe, the story is quite hazy, as the people who live those stories are hazy in how they understand the world.
For the most part of the story, the characters do not have names, not real names that is. I did this to try and show that they could be anyone, or that they did not know themselves enough to have names.
AnimaCordis
To Tear A Stone
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I loved this! Very emotional, yet not sappy. It really is a good story about the aftermath of war. My only suggestions are: Maybe give the girl or a few of the other charecters a name? I think it would bring out how things were for the girl before the war, and how she changed from the innocent girl she once was. But other than that and some minor grammer/spelling mistakes, this was great! I'd definately buy it if it was a book. But I'd also like to see the plot lines tied together a bit more, so the characters lives interweave a bit more. That's if you want to make it into a full-length novel, I mean. This was great.
5/5
This is a really powerful story--I loved it! I'd give it a 5/5 for sure!
There were a few things you should work on. Watch out for grammar and spelling issues whenever you write a story, but other than that, it was great!
Keep up the good work! :)
Oh thank you!
I meant from wehn the gemans invaded Russia, or rather tried to invade russia. I meant for the war to be farily ambiguous, as though it could really be any war. I was looking at war photos to try and grasp what it was like.
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