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THE PEASANT GIRL

December 12, 2010
By Anonymous

Summary:

Prince Caerus of Cariden is forced into an engagement with the Princess of a new world-power threatening to conquer his country. He has almost resigned himself to his fate when he stumbles across a strange peasant girl, who changes his perception of everything from life and death, beauty and ugliness, right and wrong, and love and hate.

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SheressofPower said...
on Dec. 8 2019 at 1:42 pm
SheressofPower, Arverne, New York
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Progress, not perfection

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I liked the plot of the story and am sorry that you couldn’t continue. I’m pretty sure that Keona is the peasant girl in the prologue. As a teenager she would have made a more interesting character!
TanazMasaba GOLD said...
on Sep. 16 2013 at 10:24 am
TanazMasaba GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You&#039;ve gotta dance like there&#039;s nobody watching,<br /> Love like you&#039;ll never be hurt,<br /> Sing like there&#039;s nobody listening,<br /> And live like it&#039;s Heaven on Earth.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ---William W. Purkey

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I love this story! when will you post more???
ChristineK GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2013 at 3:37 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;So the future seemed <br /> To mingle with the past. For a short space <br /> I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind <br /> This little speck of time we call &ldquo;To-day&rdquo; <br /> To the great cycle of unending life <br /> That has been and that shall be evermore.&rdquo;<br /> -Tours

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LOVE your characterization!! So good. :)
SilentWords SILVER said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 9:03 pm
SilentWords SILVER, Beavercreek, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Crying is not a weakness. You&#039;ve done it since the day you were born. It means you are alive.&quot; Author unknown

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Please write more!
I_Love_Books said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 6:54 pm
Lol :O i DID xDD
Vanendra BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 8:50 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
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YOU BOOK STALKER!!!! >.>

 

you stole my job D;

I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:18 pm
I_Love_Books, Tukwila, Washington
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I'm stalkinq your book too much :(

-IT'S SO GOOD (((:

I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:03 pm
I_Love_Books, Tukwila, Washington
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Please hurry and write more becuase I'm about to die (not litterally xD)

-It's so good ! (:

I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 12:56 pm
I_Love_Books, Tukwila, Washington
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Your book rules ;d
dreamer759 SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 10:19 pm
dreamer759 SILVER, San Ramon, California
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&quot;I know, right?&quot;<br /> (you know you say it)

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This is really good. The world you've created is so real. I love Caerus. He's a flawed person that I can't help but root for
MasterZone BRONZE said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 7:40 pm
MasterZone BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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  I think that one part of the story can be improved (Chapter 4):

  “Well,” Onaje’ said after Caerus didn’t speak for several moments. “She’s in perfect health, except for being malnourished, of course. If you don’t mind, I have other patients to attend to.”

 

  For that paragraph in the story, it said how a person is in perfect health when she was malnourished. That is just medically incorrect. You can say that a person is in perfect health, but with a cut, a buise, or a cold; you can't say malnourished.

  Malnourishment causes so much damage to the health of a person and is a very serious health concern that could lead to many more severe problems.

  Something else should have been written instead of what you wrote in the story, simply because it would be more medically accurate.

Some O said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 6:00 pm
PLEASE FINISH THIS BOOK, ITS ROCKS ;D
everything_shane BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 1:52 am
everything_shane BRONZE, Manila, Florida
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I agree :) cool story.. i love to read it :)
Magyk32 said...
on Apr. 3 2011 at 12:07 pm
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when are you going to finish this? I really really liked it.
Magyk32 said...
on Apr. 3 2011 at 12:05 pm
Magyk32, Ypsilanti, Michigan
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PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! DON'T QUIT NOW!
Lilybird SILVER said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 5:13 pm
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This is an amazing start! Please write more! I am very curious about what will happen next!!! :)
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Why did you have to make your story soooooo good?     >:(     I hope you post more chapters soon!
SilentlyRising GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 8:45 pm
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It's really good!  I'm guessing the little girl is the Pesant Girl...?  I thought she would turn into a love interest.  Darn.  Maybe there's still hope in an older sister.  The mysterious Keona, perhaps?  I don't know--you're the author!  ;)  Write on!
stellabella21 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 2:17 pm
stellabella21 BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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is is really good!
Keilah GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2010 at 11:18 am
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 Why aren't there any paragraphs in the second chapter?