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Matchmaker's Mansion

May 28, 2011
By Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."


Summary:

When Asha takes her first step inside the Matchmaker’s Mansion she had intended to find someone to take the place of her ex-boyfriend that had broken her heart…
But instead she was thrown into the arms of the mysterious Shay who makes her promise never to love him.
It all started with the first question of the Matchmaker’s Quiz: “Would you be willing to die for the person you loved?”
What will her answer be?


Hope_Princess

Matchmaker's Mansion


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lillybud7 said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 6:49 pm
lillybud7, Sheridan, Wyoming
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments
very interesting and funny cant wait for whats next : )

IMme2 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 6:01 pm
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown

please please WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

EllieHeart said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 2:26 pm
EllieHeart, Tempe, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pay no attention to what the critics say; no statue has ever been erected to a critic."










~Jean Sibelius

Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please Finish... the suspense is killing me...

on Dec. 27 2011 at 10:26 am
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 222 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

I think its a beautiful story, I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!! It must be hard to pick who Asha's gonna choose!! Kinda Hope its Shay, somehow.... Anyways your story not mine, KEEP WRITING!!

on Dec. 22 2011 at 3:05 pm
LiVeLaUgHlOvE__ GOLD, Geneva, New York
13 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life as if you'll die tomorrow, Dream as if you'll live forever.

finish it!!!

Jeera SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 3:42 pm
Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay strong; be real.

Oh my gosh. I want to know what happens next! 

on Dec. 3 2011 at 2:09 pm
wannabeauthor96, Sterling Heights, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love yourself today cuz baby, you were born this way." -Lady Gaga
"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning how to dance in the rain"<3

I need more!! Like right now!! I love it!! I love Asha, Shay, Ever, and Chase!! Espically Chase!!! If Asha doesn't want him I will take him: )  It's so good!! Post more soon!!: )

on Dec. 2 2011 at 11:12 pm
SpringMoon98 GOLD, Ava, New York
11 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone wants to change the world, but do they ever stop to think about changing themselves?"
Leo Tolstoy

This is so good can't wait for more chapters!

unicorn poop said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 1:35 pm
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Nov. 29 2011 at 4:14 pm
C.L.Erins BRONZE, Nunn, Colorado
1 article 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
The past is like a pen. You can always cross it out, but you can never erase it. ( unless you have one of those special erasable pens and in that case... well you are lucky)

Keep writing please!!!! this story is amazing!!! :D

on Nov. 28 2011 at 6:15 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Hey! Thanks so much for taking the time to read it!

And trust me- I AM overloaded with homework/projects plus work and basketball practice.

I'll try my best to write more and contact you. :-)


IMme2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 1:35 pm
IMme2 BRONZE, Farmington, New Mexico
2 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
just be yourself not some one your not.
- unknown

you need to write more pretty please im begging you!!! im sooooo hooked!

on Nov. 27 2011 at 5:48 pm
springdance BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
2 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Before God we are all equally wise - and equally foolish.
Albert Einstein

Hey Melissa! I love it!I just read all the recent chapters and decided you need to write more. :) Hope you're not overloaded with homework! -Sarah

on Nov. 27 2011 at 3:37 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

I totally agree with you! *writes mental note to self: 'get with the program!'*

I've been hitting writer's block on and off. I want my chapters to be really good, but I keep thinking they're horrible. So...I haven't been writing lately.

I will try my best! Thanks for reading!!


on Nov. 27 2011 at 2:25 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

I'm starting to believe that this is unfair......... both on accounts of characters and on the account of not posting this fast enough....

More more! I must know the truth! :) keep it up

~CraZYWrITeR~


on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:26 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

If you would like to keep reading my story- I've put more up. I hope you like it!

on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:24 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Thank you so much for your comment. I feel so loved.

I've "definitely posted more." Enjoy!


on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:22 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

Yes...I guess I will. More chapters have been added.

Heehee! Thanks for saying "please"!


on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:21 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

I hope you like the new chapters I put up!

Thanks for commenting. It's a joy to hear from my readers. <3


on Nov. 24 2011 at 9:20 pm
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 376 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

I've put more up! Enjoy- and thanks for sticking through my writer's block. :-D