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Death Before Dawn

December 10, 2010
By fusrodahsaraaa GOLD, Albany, Other
fusrodahsaraaa GOLD, Albany, Other
16 articles 5 photos 47 comments


“What’s that, in the water?” She gasped, pointing towards the gleaming pond.
Demetri grabbed her hand and pulled her towards it- closely followed by the smug Ashley. As they approached the pond they noticed that the thing in the pond water was a silhouette of a person.
A dead person.
Her skin was pale in the moonlight and her reddish hair twisted around her bare neck. No, it wasn’t bare. Two small, red bite marks were visible on her ashen neck.


Death Before Dawn

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on Feb. 9 2012 at 4:29 pm
i loved your book it was so amazing

on Aug. 17 2011 at 2:11 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

fantastic! just fantastic! please check out my poem "forgotten domain" and my new poem "the others" and please comment/rate them! thanks a ton :)

on Jul. 11 2011 at 5:22 am
fusrodahsaraaa GOLD, Albany, Other
16 articles 5 photos 47 comments
lWhy thank you ahaaa ;) I will have a look, of course :D umm there is a prequel to this, Ashley Novella in my stories... go ahead and read it too if you want :D xx

on Jul. 4 2011 at 6:39 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

i love this!!! keep up the good work!!! is there more!!!?????hope so!!! and will you check out my two newest books: Secrets Kept Within and Vampire Goddess??? and comment if you will please anyways please keep writing youre a really good writer keep up the great work

on Jan. 29 2011 at 11:30 am
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

Whoa, the cover is very...striking.


I like this, it's darker than most of the novels here. Please keep up the good work!


Will you check out my novel SuperNOVA and comment on it? Thanks :D

Leann14 GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2010 at 6:30 pm
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
16 articles 4 photos 110 comments
Nice:) I really enjoyed it! You have quite a future in writing.