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Flower that would die!

February 14, 2010
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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Silencess talk when we leave, Quietness keep us from trouble.

Sometimes when we decide to be friends with people we do it becuase we like them, becuase they are popular, becuase they could be good friends and they ARE! becuase we cant have any but them, or becuase they are rich..

Friendship is a flower, when you take care of it and keep it by the light it stays alive for long time,
If you dont, then it will die.. Maybe now or later but wont last long, Friends are what we count on in goods and bads.
Friends are there for each other through days and nights, A real friendship wont start today and end tommorrow, it will go on for years!

A true friend wont ever believe any rumor or lie about you,
A true friend gives you advice, not tell they dont know,
A true friend gives is someone you can cry infront of,
A true friend thinks of you always,
A true friend CARES ABOUT YOU!

Becuase friendship is a flower it will evenually die, no matter how good you take care of it, it will sometime be dead!
Year after Year we grow, we as humans forget, as people with hearts we love and could hate, Unlike animals we think; no matter how long a friendship goes it will sometime end, with respect and love, or disliking and all I wrote above
Let days proof to you what I've said, but for right now close your eyes while you're in bed, or whatever you were doing continue right ahead!

© Alina L., Holland Patent, NY

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I know that some people might think this isnt true, but trust me its in some way true!
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BurnHem said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 11:23 am
Well I am so glad I did! You're welcome .. this is how I thought you looked at it.. very good again!
Shahed GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2010 at 4:43 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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You've made my day! Thank you so so much! And I think it can be looked at as a poem if you want, but I thought because I talked about friendship then it's just my opinion. But thanks!
BurnHem said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:23 pm
I was reading this with my daughter she wondered why this isnt a poem? But I understand how you look at this .. I really like your work! I'm sure words you say can be written as poems as well to have such a skill-ful- way to put words into great poems! Very very very good! :) Keep on writing
Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:01 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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I'm glad you like it :)
CrystalDE PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 4:52 pm
CrystalDE PLATINUM, Concord, North Carolina
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Nice one! It has some real power!
Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 7:56 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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thank you!! Im glad you like it! :)) and no problem! you're talented too! thanks, you gave me so much you have no idea!
elfiewrites BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2010 at 6:30 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

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Wow!! This sounds like a beautiful song. I agree with this 100% and you have a strong talent for writing. Never forget that. Thank you for commenting on my work (:
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 5:37 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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I was talking about them in general :)

and im sorry not trying to be mean but sometimes death seperates us .. right? you know what i mean.. none to be taken personally
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 9:01 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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But some do last forever, my mom has a friend that she's had since she was a little girl and now she's 46 and there still best friends and always will be.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 8:53 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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well.. you know how no matter how good u take care of a friendship it will some day be over .. thats the point im trying to make :)
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 8:20 pm
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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I'm not sure that I understand the line that says, 'Because friendship is a flower it will eventually die, ' But I like It.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 8:22 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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yay ;)

sure am lol
jephte15 said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 8:18 pm
loved it. soo are you my true friend?? lol
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:06 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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thank you!

yea I cant wait either.. becuase I typed it in here so I dont have a rough draft? so yeah .. but thnx We seems like we r ganna b good frndz.. how old r u?
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 12:12 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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No problem there! I love your poetry! ( Cant wait for your new one to be published!)
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:08 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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God bless u too..

I've submitted a new poem I dont know when they are going to publish it.. thanks for reading it ;)
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 12:08 am
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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This poem really captures the concept of freindship, and the human nature...( 'we as humans forget' )It is an amazing poem. God Bless!( When are you going to have some new work???????)
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 10:20 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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thnxx.. appriciate it ;)
Farah said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 10:19 am
I like it..

great words =)
Shahed GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:35 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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