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Love
April 13, 2009
You leave me here,
I beg you to s tay.
You left me along,
Standing in the rain.
You broke my heart,
It tore me apart.
And now you've gone,
Without me today.
But we can't part,
We're meant ot be.
Because when you left,
It took a piece of me.
And without you here,
I am not a whole.
When you came back,
I was once more.
My heart is one
With yours again.
And now I understand
Why you left.
It was out of love,
That you left me there,
And out of love
That you came back here.
© Shannon A., Galesburg, IL
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This article has 7 comments.
pretty simplistic, but i still like it a lot :)
i loooove the last four lines, how you wrapped it up, it makes it all fit perfectly together.
try experimenting! with anything, different rhyme scheme, whatever works for you, i think you definitely have a lot of potential :)
itd be great if you could check out my poems/pictures thanks!
i loooove the last four lines, how you wrapped it up, it makes it all fit perfectly together.
try experimenting! with anything, different rhyme scheme, whatever works for you, i think you definitely have a lot of potential :)
itd be great if you could check out my poems/pictures thanks!
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 3:03 am
Dustin D. if you read this, I can't find any of your work, I was trying to, but I couldn't. Sorry!
ScoobyDoobieDoo SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2009 at 1:58 pm
this is awsome poetry. hey you should checkout some of mine
*loafman* said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 5:21 am
OMG i love you work it is UHmazing!
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:24 pm
Sorry, I accidentally put along in the third line, it is supposed to be alone.
