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Ocean Dream

April 22, 2009
By kari-kiwi GOLD, Snohomish, Washington
kari-kiwi GOLD, Snohomish, Washington
10 articles 20 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stop judging by mere appearences and make a right judgement"
John 7:24

As we are falling
We rumble, we tumble
We never get to see the tee
The light at the end of the tunnel
Now we wait for the bow
The final curtain closing
When we leave the sea
An ocean dream
With the big and the mean
And all unseen
We may mend and find the bend
What i might have been
In the dark you will travel far
And ignorance is blis
The words we miss
Time slowing down
We see beauty that is hidden
The sun on the horizon
A flash of light
Then all is night.

The author's comments:
I wrote this in my English class. Our assingment was to write a poem that was only focusing on the rhyming, not worrying about if it made sense or not. And as you can see that's exactly what i did!

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on May. 1 2009 at 10:05 pm
Praefiscine SILVER, Snohomish, Washington
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A grownup is a child with layers on.”
-Woody Harrelson

I love this one too! I like how you painted a picture that I can clearly see-it's really beautiful.