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Storm Of life

May 1, 2009
By Shugo_Tsuki GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
Shugo_Tsuki GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
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In the storm of life,
When things go right,
Life comes,
It show's you it's bad side!

As the wind blows,
And ice pleats you,
And rain frezzes you,
You rethink life!

Without shoes on your feet,
A shirt on your back,
Or a jacket to protect you,
You feel it like a smack!

Then the rain thins,
Then wind dies down,
The ice goes away,
You see a new day.

You're beat by the storm,
Worn by the rain,
You look at life,
Sayin' "I'm not the same."

You came out a new man,
A new girl,
A new person,
Just from the storm of life.

It's just the way it is,
Life is ***,
Life is good,
Just wait for the storm to pass.

The author's comments:
Ummm.... I wrote this because right now my girlfriends life is being f***ed u by her mother.
I wish I was just able to hold her.
But this popped in my head when I was talking to her last night trying to calm her down. I really want to hold. She live so far from me. I love her. Well I guess I'm ranting on.

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This article has 3 comments.

on May. 10 2009 at 11:36 pm
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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i like the idea of this poem, and your intentions are very sweet. i completely agree with the message of your poem :)

it contains some grammatical errors, but its still a nice poem.

itd be great if you could check out my stuff too, thanks!

on May. 10 2009 at 3:53 am
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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show her the poem and show her how much you care. it's a good poem and it's evident that you care about her

jo-jo GOLD said...
on May. 8 2009 at 8:24 pm
jo-jo GOLD, Hammond, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
They cant scare me if i scare them first

Really deep poem. nice