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I need a haiku

May 13, 2009
By LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois

I have never known
what to do for my haikus
so i wrote this one.

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Duckie430 said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 2:22 am
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

i like this :)

on Aug. 12 2009 at 4:32 am
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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i think it is great you are going for the haiku!

i think it is basically impossible so--good job!!!

SaraB. GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2009 at 12:33 am
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one" Abraham Lincoln

Love this one. Don't be sorry about the Scribbler of Dreams comment, it was a REALLY good book, it deserves a comment. I love your haikus, they actually inspired me to write a few, but after I submitted them, I realized one had 6 syllables in the 1st line. oh well. You are a great writer. :)

on Jul. 16 2009 at 9:18 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

Well it has two five silable lines and one seven sillable in the middle so it is a haiku. I thought it was good. Most people wouldn't even think about that! Brilliant! And thank you for the poem on my "As i wait for fall" poem!

on Jul. 15 2009 at 4:37 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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yeah.. i am completely incompetent at haiku... great job

on Jul. 13 2009 at 2:12 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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haha, that was cute. sounds like poetry homework that kids hand in to their teachers x) write about nature next time (: