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What He Doesn't Know

May 24, 2009
By MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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What he doesn’t know,
Is I watch how he walks,
How he talks,
What he doesn’t know,
Is that he leaves me speechless half of the time,
And he can bring a tear to my eye,
What he doesn’t know,
Is that I study his eyes,
And voice,
What he doesn’t know,
Is how I want to hold him close,
Never letting him go,
What he doesn’t know,
Is his heartbeat is the music to my life,
Always matching my mood,
What he’ll never know,
Is the way I love him so.

The author's comments:
loves my muse! and what a sweet muse it is!

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Duckie430 said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 12:21 pm
Duckie430, Riverside, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
“The secret to life is being who you are and being happy with who you are.”
"Whatever does not kill you only makes you stronger."

wow. i've been reading your poems, & you really have talent. i especially love this poem.

on Aug. 3 2009 at 9:56 pm
stephaniekip PLATINUM, Cranford, New Jersey
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I must say, I've read a few of your poems and I've already become a fan. You've really got talent :)

on Jul. 2 2009 at 10:26 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

Wow! I'm speechless. I absolutely adore this poem, and I can totally, 100% relate. If you read the majority of my poems, they are all based on the same person, and after some persistance, I learned that he (my muse), just like me, did everything that you mentioned in this poem. This is truly a beautiful piece of work. I love it :)